A little too slow
You have a great idea, great animation, and great music, but the whole thing moves so slowly. Cut out some of the walking, make the dialogue a little more entertaining and to the point, and it would be an awesome cartoon.
A little too slow
You have a great idea, great animation, and great music, but the whole thing moves so slowly. Cut out some of the walking, make the dialogue a little more entertaining and to the point, and it would be an awesome cartoon.
Too slow, hated voices
I could tell you were going for a few "Family Guy" cutscene - randomness jokes that just did not work because the whole flow of the show was interrupted. I hated the older brother's character so much (no offense to whoever does his voice). The whole thing just seemed too slow and lame
This was really good, but a few things....
Just wanna say that that was great, but the demon wasn't quite demonic enough. When he roars and stuff, maybe you should make everything shaded red for an instant or add some earthquake-like sound to it.
Other than that little thing, it was superb.
a bit confusing.....
i didn't really get any of it.... the fighting could have been a lot cooler, but the punches looked kinda weak and pointless. There probably should have also been fighting based on Nintendo and Playstation Games instead of just punching and boringness.
a longer piece like that = gold
just work really hard and you'll be making great flash movies in no time.
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